优秀英语作文10大写作技巧(2)

2018-07-16英语写作指导

4. 适当运用非谓语结构

  非谓语结构通常被认为是一种高级结构,适当运用非谓语结构,会给人一种熟练驾驭语言的印象。如:

  (1) When he heard the news, they all jumped for joy.

  → Hearing the news, they all jumped for joy.

  听了这消息他们都高兴得跳了起来。

  (2) As I didn’t know her address, I wasn’t able to get in touch with her.

  → Not knowing her address, I wasn’t able to get in touch with her.

  由于不知道她的地址,我没法和她联系。

  (3) As he was born into a peasant family, he had only two years of schooling.

  → Born into a peasant family, he had only two years of schooling.

  他出生农民家庭,只上过两年学。

  5. 结合使用长句与短句

  在英语写作中,过多地使用长句或过多地使用短句都不好。正确的做法是,根据实际情况在文章中交替使用长句与短语,使文章显得错落有致,这样不仅使文章在形式上增加美感,而且使文章读起来铿锵有力。如:

  At noon we had a picnic lunch in the sunshine. Then we had a short rest. Then we began to play happily. We sang and danced. Some told stories. Some played chess.

  → At noon we had a picnic lunch in the sunshine. After a short rest, we had great fun singing and dancing, telling jokes and playing chess.

  中午我们晒着太阳吃野餐。休息一会儿后,我们唱的唱歌,跳的跳舞,还有的讲笑话、下棋,大家玩得很开心。

  6. 适当使用短语代替单词

  (1) He has decided to be a teacher when he grows up.

  → He has made up his mind to be a teacher when he grows up.

  他已决定长大了当老师。

  (2) He doesn't like music.

  → He doesn't care much for music.

  他不大喜欢音乐。

  (3) He told me that the question was now under discussion.

  → He told me that the question was now being discussed.

  他告诉我问题现正正在讨论中。

  7. 恰当套用某些固定表达

  (1) He was very tired. He couldn’t walk any farther.

  → He was too tired to walk any farther.

  他太累了,不能再往前走了。

  (2) The film was very interesting. Both the teachers and the students liked it.

  → The film was so interesting that both the teachers and the students liked it.

  这电影很有趣,学生和老师都很喜欢。

  (3) Your son is old. He can look after himself now.

  → Your son is old enough to look after himself now.

  你的儿子已经长大,可以自己照顾自己了。

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