2017中考满分作文:照片背后的故事

2018-07-16中考英语作文

  导语:在过去的日子里,我们曾经欢笑,也曾经哭泣……下面是yuwenmi小编为大家整理的优秀英语作文,欢迎阅读与借鉴,谢谢!

  照片背后的故事

  在过去的日子里,我们曾经欢笑,也曾经哭泣……照片,或将这些精彩定格,或勾起你对往事的回忆。某英语网站向你发出邀请。请你按要求用英语写一篇文章,分享你照片背后的故事。

  要求:

  故事必须原创;

  80-120词,开头已给出,不计入总词数;

  文中不能出现自己的姓名和所在学校的名称。

  参考要点:

  描述你的照片(时间,地点,人物……);

  分享你的故事(起因,经过,结果……);

  谈谈你的感受(感动,怀念,影响……)。

  This is a photo that is very special to me. In the photo,

  高分范文

  【写作点拨】本文要求围绕“照片”叙述一个与之相关的故事,是一篇记叙文。根据参考要点可知,文章属于经典“三段式”的写作:1. 描述照片拍摄的时间、地点和人物等基本信息;2. 叙述与照片相关的故事,包括起因、经过和结果等;3. 谈论对事情的感受。写作过程中,要注意时态的变化:描述过去发生的事情主要用一般过去时,谈论对事情的感受主要用一般现在时。

  【高分范文】

  This is a photo that is very special to me. In the photo, I was 10 while my dad looked younger. Look, we are playing ping pong happily.

  I used to be a ping pong player. My dad trained me so hard, though he was tired after a day’s work. Once, I lost a game and I felt so sad that I wanted to give up. My father said nothing, sitting quietly with me. The next morning, I found a piece of paper. It said, “Never give up, dear. I am proud of you!”

  Now, I spend less time playing ping pong because of my busy study. But I will never forget what my father told me. He is proud of me. How lucky I am to be his daughter!

上一篇:2017中考高分英语范文:帮助他人下一篇:中考优秀作文:我和朋友之间的故事