篇三:2016高考英语作文
课标全国1适用地区:河南、河北、山西、山东、湖南、湖北、江西、广东、安徽、福建。
假定你是李华,暑假想去一家外资公司兼职,已写好申请书和个人简历(resume)。给外教Ms Jenkins写信,请她帮你修改所附材料的文字和格式(format)。
注意:
1、词数100左右;
2、可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
参考范文:
Dear Ms Jenkins,
I want to tell you something about my plan for the summer vacation and I’d like you to dome a favor.(点名主题:暑假,请帮忙)
To get some working experience, I plan to find a part-time job in a foreign capital company(要点1:想去外资公司兼职). I have already finished my job application and personal resume(要点2:已写好求职申请和个人简历).However, my English is bad. Worse still, I don’t even know much about the format of a personal resume (说出自己的困难). So, I’m writing you a letter, hoping to get your guide and
suggestion. You can correct any mistakes yon find in them.(总结,点名写信目的)
Looking forward to your reply(期盼回复). And I’d be really thankful(表达感激之情).
Yours,
Li Hua(结束语)
课标全国2适用地区:黑龙江、吉林、辽宁、宁夏、海南、青海、西藏、内蒙古、新疆、云南、贵州、甘肃(最后三个不考听力)。
假定你是李华,你校摄影俱乐部(photographyclub)将举办国际中学生摄影展。请给你的英国朋友Peter写封信,请他提供作品。信的内容包括:
1.主题:环境保护;
2.展览时间;
3.投稿cfemail="7296d1c81b1c061e021a1d061d011a1d0532151f01111a1d1d1e5c111d1f">[email protected]
注意:
1.词数100左右;
2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
标准范文:
Dear Peter (称呼),
Our schoolphotography club is going to hold an International High School
StudentPhotography Show(你校摄影俱乐部将举办国际中学生摄影展。). The theme of the show is environmental protection(要点1,主题:环境保护). It will start from June 15th and last for threehours(要点2,展览时间). Anystudentwho is interested iswelcome to participate(鼓励投稿). I know you take good pictures and you’ve always wanted to dosomething for environmental protection. I remember you showed me some photos onthat theme the last time you visited our school. This is surely a good chance for
morepeople to see them(引申:点名Peter可以投稿的原因:摄影好,也喜欢为环保做贡献,以及良好的结果), If you want to join, you can send your photos
[email protected](要点3,投稿信息)
Hope to hear from yousoon.(提出期望)
Yours,
Li Hua (结束语)
课标全国3适用地区:陕西、广西、重庆。
假定你是李华,与留学生朋友Bob约好一起去书店,因故不能赴约。请给他写封邮件,内容包括:
1.表示歉意;
2.说明原因;
3.另约时间。
注意:
1.词数100左右
2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
标准范文:
Dear Bob,(称呼)
I am sorry to say that I cannot go to the bookstorewith you on Friday afternoon(要点1:点题致歉). I have just found that Ihave to attend an important class meeting afternoon(要点2:说明原因). I hope the change will notcause you too much trouble.(引申)
Shall we go on Saturday morning(要点3:另约时间) We can set out early so that wewill have more time to read and select books(引申:另约,强调什么事). If it is convenient for you,let's meet at 8:30 outside the school gate. If not, let me know what timesuits you best.(增加细节,给出两种时间原则)I should be availableany time after school next week.(亮明自己下周随时有空,可不能再延期致歉啦) Yours,
Li Hua(结束语)
英语考场作文写作建议
1.仔细审题,简列提纲。
2.扩展提纲,连句成文。
3.过渡词语,衔接紧凑。
4.卷面整洁,爽心悦目。
5.细心复查,确保无误。
附:衔接连贯常用语
表举例示范:for example, in other words, for instance, that is, that is to say等
表因果关系:therefore,so, hence, thus, accordingly, consequently, as a result等
表总结概括:insummary, to sum up, in brief, in short, on the whole, in a word, all in all, inconclusion, as has been noted, on the whole等 表转折让步:unfortunately,though/ although, anyway, but, however, otherwise, still, yet, after all, inspite of, on the contrary, on the other hand, in any case, whatever等
表递进过渡:again,also, worse still, obviously, then, besides, further, furthermore, moreover,next, similarly, after a while, at the same time, in addition, meanwhile,suddenly, later, soon, in the same way, what’s more等