Today was Sunday. The weather was fine and warm. The sky was very clear and blue. My classmates and I were very happy， because we went out for a picnic at Nanshan Hill.
We went to Nanshan Hill by bike with fruits， eggs， meat，vegetables， knives and some other things.
About one and a half hours later， we came to a nice place at the foot of the hill. There were many beautiful flowers and green trees. Birds sang their sweet songs. How pleased we were! Then we were busy with the picnic. Some of us were getting water，some were cutting the meat and vegetables and cook，others were sitting on the grass and waiting for nice lunch.
At about 13 o"clock， our lunch was ready. We all sat around on the green grass， singing， talking， eating and drinking.
At about 16：00 we began packing for our return.
What a nice time we were having!
[点评] 小作者能用准确、 地道的语言， 简练的语句非常生动地描写出了野炊的场面。
这篇文章条理清楚， 尤其是“ some … some … ， others …”句型，以及 singing， eating 等现在分词作伴随状语的运用，使这篇日记增色不少。
本文结尾使用了一个感叹句，更加反映出小作者对这次野炊的真实情感。
［一句话英文日记范例］
Jan. 1st 2015 Thursday Sunny
Happy
It was sunny and cold today. I got up early.
Because today is my birthday!写日记，你会用到以下缩写：
月份缩写：
一月：January 缩写:Jan
二月：February 缩写:Feb
三月：March 缩写:Mar
四月：April 缩写:Apr
五月：May 缩写:May
六月：June 缩写:Jun
七月：July 缩写:Jul
八月：August 缩写:Aug
九月：September 缩写:Sept
十月：October 缩写:Oct 十一月：November 缩写:Nov
十二月：December 缩写:Dec
在日期的缩写中：月份缩写加数字的缩写哦
1号 就是1st，2号2nd，3号 3rd 4号以后都是在后边加上th
如：1月1号 Jan. 1st
12月12号 Dec. 12th
星期的缩写：
Monday 星期一 Mon.
Tuesday 星期二 Tues.
Wednesday 星期三 Wed.
Thursday 星期四 Thurs.
Friday 星期五 Fri.
Saturday 星期六 Sat.
Sunday 星期天 Sun.
时间的表示格式：
通用的各国时间表示 小时:分:秒 AM/PM