我最喜欢冬天 I like winter best.
【习作要求】
Write eight or more sentences about the season you like best.
内容要点
1.四个季节中任选一个季节。
2.被选季节的特点(气候、时间、事物、活动等)。
3.人们在此季节所从事的活动。
4.作者自己喜爱的活动和感受。
【参考范文】
I like winter best. Though it is very cold, it is good for skating. I often go skating on Sundays with my father. When it snows, everything turns white. Trees and houses are covered with thick snow. How beautiful the world looks! My friends and I like to make snowmen. Sometimes we make snowballs and throw them at each other. That's a very interesting game. I like winter holiday very much because the Spring Festival is the happiest time of the year.
我最喜欢冬天。虽然很冷,但很适合滑冰。我经常在星期天和我父亲一起去滑冰。下雪的时候,一切都变白了。树木和房屋都覆盖着厚厚的积雪。世界看起来多么美丽!我喜欢和我的朋友一起堆雪人。有时我们做雪球扔向对方。这是一个非常有趣的游戏。我非常喜欢寒假,因为春节是一年中最快乐的时光。
【名师点评】
这是一篇描写季节的文章,文章难度一般。要求从自己的角度描写季节和感受季节。应注意以下几个问题:
(1)确定全文的时态。此文一般选用一般现在时。
(2)除了对季节的描述,一定要有自己的见解,这是得分的重要内容和关键所在。
作者用流畅的语言描述了冬天的景色。全文意思表达清楚,结构紧密。
The Winter Holiday 寒假
I like the winter holiday very much.
Though it's very short,I can enjoy the Spring Festival.
I can watch cartoon every day.
I needn't go to school frepuently.
Sometimes I can go to play with my friend outside.
With the festival coming,I can play all the time.
I can play video game with my brother.
I am good at playing PC game.
So I often beats my brother.
Then more and more relative came to my home.
We had dinner together.
It's so lively that I'am very happy.
But I still have to do my homework.
我非常喜欢寒假。
虽然它很短,但我可以享受春节。
我可以天天看动画片。
我不需要去学校。
有时我可以和朋友到外面去玩。
随着节日的到来,我可以一直玩。
我可以和哥哥一起玩游戏。
我擅长打电脑游戏。
所以我一直赢。
然后越来越多的亲戚来我家。
我们一起吃晚餐。
这是如此生动,我很高兴。
但我仍然要做我的家庭作业。